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by Charles E Minshall

It's so darn hot
I feel perditioned,
I need a place
That's air conditioned.

Drench me with deodorant
When I expire,
It's probably as hot
Down by the fire.



06/28/2003

Posted on 06/29/2003
Copyright © 2025 Charles E Minshall

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/29/03 at 07:45 PM

What a whimisically and wonderfully poetic way to say, "It is hot as hades!" Sounds better too. ;)

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 06/29/03 at 07:54 PM

You and that wit of yours! I love this! Too funny...find a cool spot Charles!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/29/03 at 09:36 PM

Excellent word play.... it gets hot where I live too.

Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/30/03 at 01:17 AM

You've said it perfectly! Love that word, "perditioned", gotta see if I can work that in on someone:o)

Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 06/30/03 at 09:03 PM

I know that feeling all too well. Want to come help me cut up these trees LOL. Water is my best friend right now. Good poem Charlie.

Posted by Mara Meade on 07/01/03 at 10:17 PM

-chuckling- Charlie, I love this... ain't it the truth? Are we getting older or is it just getting hotter?

Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/01/03 at 11:04 PM

lolol... Oh Charlie.. this is wonderful... and I AGREE!!!! IT's HOT!!!

Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/03/03 at 05:10 AM

Well, so i was wrong abt u not posting a poem lately.And what wonderful slice of poetic piece u have baked here.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/07/03 at 04:09 AM

Ah yes, Mitchum stock is rising, but not nearly as high as this, your red flag. Goodie, Chaz.

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 07/08/03 at 11:08 AM

Your words bring a smile through the heat! - RCat

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 04:08 AM

I can relate so much! I am dying for the airconditioner right now!

Posted by JD Clay on 08/16/03 at 02:56 AM

Hey, quit hoggin' the fan, hehe! Good one Charlie. Peace...

Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:27 AM

Whew. *fans himself* It's been a long summer. Hilarious writing. :)

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/09/03 at 11:39 PM

Try mitchum, they say you can even skip a day!

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/22/03 at 12:02 AM

and where do you think you're going when you expire???? well done

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