| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/29/03 at 07:45 PM What a whimisically and wonderfully poetic way to say, "It is hot as hades!" Sounds better too. ;) |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 06/29/03 at 07:54 PM You and that wit of yours! I love this! Too funny...find a cool spot Charles! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/29/03 at 09:36 PM Excellent word play.... it gets hot where I live too. |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/30/03 at 01:17 AM You've said it perfectly! Love that word, "perditioned", gotta see if I can work that in on someone:o) |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 06/30/03 at 09:03 PM I know that feeling all too well. Want to come help me cut up these trees LOL. Water is my best friend right now. Good poem Charlie. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/01/03 at 10:17 PM -chuckling- Charlie, I love this... ain't it the truth? Are we getting older or is it just getting hotter? |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/01/03 at 11:04 PM lolol... Oh Charlie.. this is wonderful... and I AGREE!!!! IT's HOT!!! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 07/03/03 at 05:10 AM Well, so i was wrong abt u not posting a poem lately.And what wonderful slice of poetic piece u have baked here. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/07/03 at 04:09 AM Ah yes, Mitchum stock is rising, but not nearly as high as this, your red flag. Goodie, Chaz. |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 07/08/03 at 11:08 AM Your words bring a smile through the heat! - RCat |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 04:08 AM I can relate so much! I am dying for the airconditioner right now! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/16/03 at 02:56 AM Hey, quit hoggin' the fan, hehe! Good one Charlie.
Peace... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/25/03 at 07:27 AM Whew. *fans himself* It's been a long summer. Hilarious writing. :) |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 11/09/03 at 11:39 PM Try mitchum, they say you can even skip a day! |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/22/03 at 12:02 AM and where do you think you're going when you expire???? well done |