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failing the pantheon (wine to water)

by Andrew S Adams

stand up on my own two feet again
i've been walking on yours for so long
the legs have crumbled like those roman pillars
failing the pantheon
got a base to construct a day
got a night that i've thrown to the dogs
and i am laughing, you are laughing
it's a happy machiene, and we're both cogs
A brilliant flash of light is all we see
remind us of our own celebrity
but do we break apart from the modern trend?
no- you just break my heart and i'm left to bend;

after the math
and all your computations
the scent of a cent
propells these deviations;
and you or i, we cant dream
we get lost in our own overthrow
What we are today will be who we are;
but not what we are tomorrow.

And where do i stand up in you-
a sordid, corporate love affair
what is love- a brutal lie-
well, to god it is for all i care.

you and i, so codependant
this independant tag is like
water to wine-
nobody gives a fuck about the
other way around.

06/20/2003

Author's Note: written at 2AM after seeing a load of radiohead videos.

Posted on 06/21/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 06/21/03 at 03:44 AM

You went on a very fruitful Radiohead binge. Especially the 'no- you just break my heart and i'm left to bend'. I loved that.

Posted by Richard D Frederick on 06/22/03 at 04:57 AM

good lines in this one, very descriptive.

Posted by Cole Miller on 06/25/03 at 03:02 AM

the last stanza is amazing.

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