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Fulgurites by Bruce W NiedtI learned of them on Jockeys Ridge,
that mountainous dune on the Outer Banks
irregular sand-crusted tubes, the size
of a finger, or bigger, polished inside,
smooth as a rifle barrel.
You find them in the sand after thunderstorms
when lightning strikes, stabbing
into the ground at three-thousand degrees,
superheating the sand around it,
fusing it to glass, forming solid branches
several feet into the dunes.
People dig them up, declaring their value
you can buy them on the Internet, complete
with New Age claims of their power to heal,
even to increase sexual prowess.
Forget the mumbo-jumbo
what impresses me is this document
to the punch of nature
that we can collect the souvenir
of a split-second, this newly-minted fossil
of pure deadly power.
06/14/2003 Author's Note: This phenomenon always fascinated me - I tried three versions of this poem and two are posted here (the third was a huiku). Please read both and tell me which you prefer.... d:-)
Posted on 06/14/2003 Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/14/03 at 02:31 PM Unique and good commentary on society... by the way, know where I can buy one? (wink) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/17/03 at 04:40 PM I enjoyed this very much Bruce, but then I enjoy most if not all your stuff. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/19/03 at 08:23 PM After reading both versions I'm on the fence(thank goodness it's not electric). If I was tortured into choosing, however, I could be prodded into this one. I enjoy the descriptive syntax and easy flow throughout. Nice work, pal.
Peace... |
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