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Fulgurites

by Bruce W Niedt

I learned of them on Jockey’s Ridge,

that mountainous dune on the Outer Banks –

irregular sand-crusted tubes, the size

of a finger, or bigger, polished inside,

smooth as a rifle barrel.

 

You find them in the sand after thunderstorms

when lightning strikes, stabbing

into the ground at three-thousand degrees,

superheating the sand around it,

fusing it to glass, forming solid branches

several feet into the dunes.

People dig them up, declaring their value –

you can buy them on the Internet, complete

with New Age claims of their power to heal,

even to increase sexual prowess.

 

Forget the mumbo-jumbo –

what impresses me is this document

to the punch of nature –

that we can collect the souvenir

of a split-second, this newly-minted fossil

of pure deadly power.

06/14/2003

Author's Note: This phenomenon always fascinated me - I tried three versions of this poem and two are posted here (the third was a huiku). Please read both and tell me which you prefer.... d:-)

Posted on 06/14/2003
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/14/03 at 02:31 PM

Unique and good commentary on society... by the way, know where I can buy one? (wink)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/17/03 at 04:40 PM

I enjoyed this very much Bruce, but then I enjoy most if not all your stuff.

Posted by JD Clay on 06/19/03 at 08:23 PM

After reading both versions I'm on the fence(thank goodness it's not electric). If I was tortured into choosing, however, I could be prodded into this one. I enjoy the descriptive syntax and easy flow throughout. Nice work, pal. Peace...

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