Sink Or Swim by Cole MillerIt all comes down to
Sink or swim today, and my
Shoes are made of lead. 06/11/2003 Author's Note: just like fight or flight, but muh, whatever
Posted on 06/12/2003 Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jessica Yen on 06/12/03 at 04:48 AM i know the feeling. |
Posted by Andrew S Adams on 06/12/03 at 04:55 AM a very nice flow within the form. a good poem, with an unfortunate situation attached... |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 07:30 PM Well articulated in a restrictive format... well done. |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/15/03 at 07:47 AM lot said in so few words..:) |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/16/11 at 04:22 PM Story of my life, as well as most other poets. Well done. |
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