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Sink Or Swim

by Cole Miller

It all comes down to
Sink or swim today, and my
Shoes are made of lead.

06/11/2003

Author's Note: just like fight or flight, but muh, whatever

Posted on 06/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jessica Yen on 06/12/03 at 04:48 AM

i know the feeling.

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 06/12/03 at 04:55 AM

a very nice flow within the form. a good poem, with an unfortunate situation attached...

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 07:30 PM

Well articulated in a restrictive format... well done.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/15/03 at 07:47 AM

lot said in so few words..:)

Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/16/11 at 04:22 PM

Story of my life, as well as most other poets. Well done.

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