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[Haiku] On withered leaves

by Rommel Cruz

Solitary child
Wet winds whisper to the ground
Withered leaves play tag.

05/28/2003

Author's Note: Ehem. My second haiku.

Posted on 05/31/2003
Copyright © 2020 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/31/03 at 06:28 PM

Methinks you are a natural haikuist... or whatever they are called I like the use of w's... they just roll right off the lips

Posted by Traci Mabats on 06/01/03 at 12:08 AM

I liked the alliteration in this as well. Wonderful.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 06/01/03 at 06:50 AM

i loveyour haikus :)

Posted by JD Clay on 06/12/03 at 07:49 PM

Wow! You catch on real fast. This is outstanding work Rommel. Peace...

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