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[Haiku] On withered leaves
by Rommel CruzSolitary child
Wet winds whisper to the ground
Withered leaves play tag. 05/28/2003 Author's Note: Ehem. My second haiku.
Posted on 05/31/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rommel Cruz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/31/03 at 06:28 PM Methinks you are a natural haikuist... or whatever they are called
I like the use of w's... they just roll right off the lips |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 06/01/03 at 12:08 AM I liked the alliteration in this as well. Wonderful. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 06/01/03 at 06:50 AM i loveyour haikus :) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/12/03 at 07:49 PM Wow! You catch on real fast. This is outstanding work Rommel.
Peace... |
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