[Haiku] On withered leaves
by Rommel Cruz
Wet winds whisper to the ground
Withered leaves play tag.
Author's Note: Ehem. My second haiku.
Posted on 05/31/2003
Copyright © 2021 Rommel Cruz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/31/03 at 06:28 PM|
Methinks you are a natural haikuist... or whatever they are called
I like the use of w's... they just roll right off the lips
|Posted by Traci Mabats on 06/01/03 at 12:08 AM|
I liked the alliteration in this as well. Wonderful.
|Posted by Christina Bruno on 06/01/03 at 06:50 AM|
i loveyour haikus :)
|Posted by JD Clay on 06/12/03 at 07:49 PM|
Wow! You catch on real fast. This is outstanding work Rommel.