Plaid Flowers by Charles J HannanInvoking me
Far from where I lie
Living lives
So different
Distant dreams
Of meadows flowing
Cherry blossom kisses
A subtle breeze
Blowing
Reaching out
I carve your name
In cotton candy clouds
As the sun
Drenches me
In pools of warmth
Like your touch
A song
Sweetly sung by angels
Divine
My body rests
In a field of plaid flowers
My mind in tune
With you 05/25/2003 Posted on 05/25/2003 Copyright © 2024 Charles J Hannan
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/25/03 at 05:01 PM another great poem, classical and sweet. romantic and refined :) |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/25/03 at 05:06 PM a but dreamy and sweet. how much are the cotton candy clouds? |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/25/03 at 08:08 PM Sentimental, tender, romantic. Brings a smile. Very pleasant read. |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/25/03 at 11:23 PM MUAHS!!!!!! |
Posted by JD Clay on 06/03/03 at 02:23 AM This superb piece starts with a luring title and is backed up with a wonderfilled text. Nice work, Charles.
Peace... |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/03 at 06:17 PM Really like how you project love through images which themselves have been projected by that same love. Plaid flowers...neat word combo...adds new meaning to psychadelic. :o) |
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