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Indentation

by Alastre Zidler

Months
I've spent
With my back
Against pillows,
Frantic to find a spot
Still warm from your body.
The bedroom door
Hangs accused of
Not framing
My favorite
Portrait
Anymore

05/18/2003

Posted on 05/18/2003
Copyright © 2019 Alastre Zidler

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/20/03 at 04:33 AM

Purposely the silhouette of a head?! And evocative in so few lines! What a great command of the topic.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/22/03 at 06:49 PM

But the association survives. Oh! they hardly die.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/06/03 at 09:16 PM

lovely poem. i alsohave a strange facination with the word indentation.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/09/04 at 04:54 PM

"The bedroom door Hangs accused of..." VERY clever word use. I love it!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/21/09 at 08:21 PM

Love your short, creative images.

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