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by Graeme Fielden

imagine if love was blood
silent beneath the skin
circulating always
liberated by accident


Posted on 05/17/2003
Copyright © 2022 Graeme Fielden

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/17/03 at 03:52 PM

Quite profound! especially thanks to that last line.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/17/03 at 05:08 PM

well then i guess i wouldn't want to fall in love, for it would be like suicide... if i'm following correctly. going back a step metaphorically, this speaks to me of perhaps the pain and sacrifice involved in love

Posted by Alastre Zidler on 05/21/03 at 05:03 PM

One metaphorical situation, so much floods the mind! "By accident" is where it hits you. . . imagine, indeed. . . bam!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:29 PM

Dark and lovely. Well done.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/13/03 at 11:47 PM

what a great POTD!!! Congrats!!!!

Posted by William Teo on 06/14/03 at 04:02 AM

WOW! very unique, never occurred to me before... very interesting idea :)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/14/03 at 12:45 PM

Succinct and vibrant! Love liberated would be no loss! The more it is shared the more there is! Thought provoking poem.

Posted by JD Clay on 06/14/03 at 01:10 PM

Taking this into the realm of possibility, your cogent Poem of the Day leaves me with an open wound. Congratulations, Graeme. Peace...

Posted by Cole Miller on 09/14/03 at 11:49 PM

this is beautiful.

Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 04/24/08 at 04:50 PM

this made my day. what an incredible thought. i'll subscribe to that idea. i am genuinely floored by this. great work!

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