| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/17/03 at 03:52 PM Quite profound! especially thanks to that last line. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/17/03 at 05:08 PM well then i guess i wouldn't want to fall in love, for it would be like suicide... if i'm following correctly. going back a step metaphorically, this speaks to me of perhaps the pain and sacrifice involved in love |
| Posted by Alastre Zidler on 05/21/03 at 05:03 PM One metaphorical situation, so much floods the mind! "By accident" is where it hits you. . . imagine, indeed. . . bam! |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/12/03 at 03:29 PM Dark and lovely. Well done. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/13/03 at 11:47 PM what a great POTD!!! Congrats!!!! |
| Posted by William Teo on 06/14/03 at 04:02 AM WOW! very unique, never occurred to me before... very interesting idea :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/14/03 at 12:45 PM Succinct and vibrant! Love liberated would be no loss! The more it is shared the more there is! Thought provoking poem. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/14/03 at 01:10 PM Taking this into the realm of possibility, your cogent Poem of the Day leaves me with an open wound. Congratulations, Graeme.
Peace... |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 09/14/03 at 11:49 PM this is beautiful. |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 04/24/08 at 04:50 PM this made my day. what an incredible thought. i'll subscribe to that idea. i am genuinely floored by this. great work! |
