| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/15/03 at 06:21 PM I hate when that happens! Very clever and humorous. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/15/03 at 08:57 PM LOL!!! A bit of tongue-in-cheek humor. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/17/03 at 03:44 PM LOL! My sentiments exactly. Ever the creative rebel, I've done my own experimentation with haiku. If you'd like to read them, look for Four Very Short Poems Masquerading As Haiku in I think my Ripples folder. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/17/03 at 05:12 PM hahah! yes, one can feel like quite the syllable juggler with those things, if you follow the old school definition. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/20/03 at 01:38 PM haha. that's why i dont write haiku or those other metered poems. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/22/03 at 05:50 PM Haiku on numerology or is it numerology composed in Haiku? haha Well, It was fun reading this. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/21/03 at 02:43 AM *applause* Well done, it's quite amusing. :) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/23/03 at 03:20 PM Very fun little piece here. Extremely playful and cute. Great read. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 04/17/04 at 05:33 PM ahahahaha... you have described precisely why i have yet to write my own haiku... ah, thank you so much for the smile!!!... blessings... |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/22/04 at 01:10 PM Ha! I don't write many haikus, but I did used to have a poetry professor with strict line-syllable requirements, so I can feel the frustration ;) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/11/05 at 01:56 AM Rereading and again enjoying a few of your haiku! |
