| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/15/03 at 08:58 PM Clever comparison! A sense of timelessness! |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/17/03 at 02:40 PM Intruiging! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/17/03 at 05:30 PM Yes, it stops chasing you when you stop chasing it. Subtle. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/18/03 at 09:55 PM As a neurotic clock watcher, ditto on those previous comments. Well done sir! |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/21/03 at 02:45 AM Hmm, that's a clever and interesting comparison, and right on. |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 09/14/03 at 11:47 PM amazing. this is one of my favorite reads so far. I have been wearing a watch for seven months now that has said 11:36.... |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/15/04 at 09:42 AM brilliant... take a moment and you shall see... great introspection of that which isn't "there"... excellent... blessings... |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 12:25 AM Perception is everything, time stops when we learn to stop it. Great manipulation of time-less theme. |
| Posted by Deborah Breuer on 08/30/06 at 11:25 PM Okay, this is what I'd call one of the great ones (without making your head to big). You really stretch the limitations of my imagination as I contemplate the various interpretations of time and the various possibilities of perspective changes as time continues...I like (okay, I love) it |
