Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/05/03 at 03:59 PM lolol.... oh Charlie! WOW you do these so very well! I love the wordplay and how you twist things all around with it! Superb poetry! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/05/03 at 04:48 PM LOL! Sounds like you need to build an ark. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/05/03 at 06:21 PM The truly frustrated weatherman! LOL!!! Really neat twist at the end! |
Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 05/06/03 at 05:26 AM LOL...that is definately the truth... We are never happy with what we have... we always want something different. Nicely done Charlie! ~Mel~ |
Posted by David R Spellman on 05/06/03 at 11:12 PM Seems we are never happy with the weather we get, eh? At least we can laugh and write about it like in this clever piece of yours though. |
Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/07/03 at 04:06 AM so we don't want wetter grass or dryer grass just some nice in-between grass in our backyard ;) |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/07/03 at 05:45 AM Yet somehow...somewhere wetter sounds better! Must be I'm used to all the rain ;) |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/10/03 at 03:16 AM HaHaHa! A smart person that can be careful what he asks for! Wish I were! |
Posted by JD Clay on 06/05/03 at 12:09 PM I suppose we are left to choose one extreme over the other, eh? Good stuff, pal.
Peace... |
Posted by Bethany Lee on 10/05/07 at 05:59 PM weather patterns still relevant. I enjoyed the meter of this piece. Bravo! |