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The "I" Poem
by J. P. DaviesI wanna run away
I wanna scream my lungs out
I gotta be free of this
I gotta live my life
I Can't Stop Now
I Can't Quit Anyway
I have You in sight
I have friends who care
I need love and support
I need truth at all times
I seek light through dark
I seek company when alone
I feel pain daily
I feel lost in my own head
I say alot of shit
I say nothing at all
I rock the tunes
I rock the Casbah
I trust everyone sometimes
I trust no one all the time
I dream of the future
I dream I'm falling
I like doing this
I like my world
I hate rude people
I hate downers
I drink in the sun
I drink in knowledge
I end up fine in the end
I end up wanting more 05/04/2003 Author's Note: This one was an experiment
Posted on 05/04/2003
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/08/03 at 04:53 PM I I captain! Very well put. I like how this progresses down the page. |
| Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 05/13/03 at 04:22 PM This is really cool! I definetly relate to the feelings of madness. |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 10/05/03 at 07:35 PM "I wanna run away
I wanna scream my lungs out
I gotta be free of this
I gotta live my life
I Can't Stop Now
I Can't Quit Anyway
I have You in sight" and
"I feel lost in my own head
I say alot of $#%@
I say nothing at all"
Are powerful statements that work so well in this.
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