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Simple Closure (haiku)
by Rhodora M FitzgeraldDead things wash ashore
where the rocks and waves collide
and the sun departs
04/29/2003 Author's Note: I'm finding out that haikus are a lot harder to write than I thought!
Posted on 04/29/2003
Copyright © 2025 Rhodora M Fitzgerald
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 04/29/03 at 08:58 PM You've managed this one very well. Excellent! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/30/03 at 10:21 AM i like the imagery a lot. =) |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/01/03 at 10:30 AM I love this haiku!!
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/02/03 at 04:55 PM Very good! Great emotional impact for such a short poem, as a haiku should. :o) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/03/03 at 03:39 PM and in your discovery, you are creating beautiful work |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/14/03 at 02:25 AM Very strong first words, choice of words packs a lot of emotion |
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