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mythical demise

by Michele Schottelkorb

the angel weeps softly
amidst the rain
the faerie does his best
to swallow the pain
the dragon sets aglow
tattered branches of old
the gargoyle feigns a smile
for memories turned cold
the elf just cries
crystal tears of sadness
the unicorn is bewildered
by the lack of gladness
the leprechaun jumps
but there is no joy
the sprite still flies
yet, without her toy
the pegasus just stands
staring at sick clouds
the gnome cannot see
as the darkness abounds

what, pray tell
has happened here?
imagination faded
with one small tear

would you, could you
heal this place?
it takes just one wish
from one smiling face

04/23/2003

Posted on 04/24/2003
Copyright © 2025 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/24/03 at 04:18 PM

'it takes just one wish from one smiling face' You said this so beautifully. A positive wish and a smile, both vibrations with a positive charge.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 07/21/03 at 11:07 PM

This poem reminds me of this place I went to all the time, "Elfstone's Mystical Pub and Hideaway," it was decorated with all these faeries. Unfortunetly it closed down. Good peice, good imagery about the mystical realm.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/05/03 at 02:25 PM

I agree with my buddy, Sallie. With this, my dear Michele, you woke up the little boy in this old man this morning, and taught him a lesson about growing up.

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