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Love Unfiltered
by Traci MabatsI could give you love
raw and unfiltered
captivating like the sky
at dusk
above the plains of Montana
hills of grass like
gently rolling waves
I could be a dryad
amongst the stars
Orion dripping from
my tongue
I could burn you
like a slow flame
until your silent surrender
and let the fire consume
We could make the sun
blush a deeper
shade of red
before dawn breaks
All you have to do
is beckon me
04/23/2003 Posted on 04/23/2003
Copyright © 2024 Traci Mabats
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 04/23/03 at 11:15 PM very beautiful, i agree |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/25/03 at 02:18 PM Unique & provoking.. I enjoy reading your work. :) |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/30/03 at 01:51 PM You write so directly in an abstract kind of way in this. It's erotic, provoking and captivated me. I do enjoy your work. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/18/03 at 09:01 PM Beautifully written love poem with a certain playful sensuality that speaks directly to the heart. Great writing. |
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