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Acrostic Kinda Poem

by J. P. Davies

Oh my god I Can't
Belong in this wOrld
See me fight Me?
Empty thought Patterns
Surender yoUr mind
Slide down beLow
Inside your mindS eye
Organic Insanity
Never mOre
Sink lower thaN ever

04/21/2003

Posted on 04/21/2003
Copyright © 2024 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 04/21/03 at 11:36 PM

Holy god you are brilliant. I love it.... a sort of mixed acrostic, I think it's wonderful.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/23/03 at 07:56 PM

I agree w/Trisha - its ingenious. Great job.

Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 05/13/03 at 04:24 PM

I agree with Trisha, this is amazing.

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