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phoenix sunset

by Patricia J Reed

a high, lonely
pink and blue cloud
wept on the mountain
of grey and purple below
as the sun set
like a fire
behind the mountain
golden clouds danced
unaware of the coming storm


Posted on 04/19/2003
Copyright © 2022 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 04/19/03 at 03:24 AM

This is really nice, I like this, I can picture it in my mind when reading it, I like it!

Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/22/03 at 06:08 PM

A lovely depiction :)

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