| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/10/03 at 05:26 AM i have to say that the following lines are an absolute gem, a moment of brilliance in a good poem, i think you get to the deepest inside of a suicide thought with this: "let me know / How shipwrecks feel / at the bottom of the ocean" <--that's superb. (some poems i feel are more like vehicles for that one truly insightful phrase within) |