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In Despair (haiku)

by Rhodora M Fitzgerald

Crippled icicle
rendering to a slow death
sweats in morning sun

04/06/2003

Posted on 04/07/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rhodora M Fitzgerald

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/08/03 at 02:05 AM

What haiku's all about. Quite the vivid, evocative poetic snapshot.

Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 04/12/03 at 08:09 AM

Very nice. Beautiful use of imagery. A well written Haiku.

Posted by John Ilotan on 04/17/03 at 07:11 PM

Beautiful haiku. I can see that icicle melting. That something so ordinary can be so moving is wonderfully expressed. Great work.

Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 05/16/03 at 02:00 PM

excellent work. beautiful mental pic of hanging icicles but personified so that i could imagine myself there, slowly dripping, as troubles i cannot escape beat at me. very well titled.

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