Crippled icicle rendering to a slow death sweats in morning sun
04/06/2003
What haiku's all about. Quite the vivid, evocative poetic snapshot.
Very nice. Beautiful use of imagery. A well written Haiku.
Beautiful haiku. I can see that icicle melting. That something so ordinary can be so moving is wonderfully expressed. Great work.
excellent work. beautiful mental pic of hanging icicles but personified so that i could imagine myself there, slowly dripping, as troubles i cannot escape beat at me. very well titled.