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The Message

by Christel Crews

How do I tell you
what I'm wanting to say
You might not understand
At least not today

You've become a part of me
my soul with yours combined
I can not imagine
Your life not in mine

You make my days joyful
you complete my life
If I don't hear from you
I can't sleep at night

I call out to you
in the void of night
Though you're not with me
You whisper "Everything's all right"

I hear your sweet voice
calling my name
You've touched my life
Now, I'm not the same

I see your face
looking at mine
I want to touch you
But you're all in my mind

I know you're wondering
why I'm calling this late
I've just got to know
Do you feel the same

04/06/2003

Posted on 04/07/2003
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/08/03 at 02:25 AM

The source of this impression seems very intense. I hope these vibrations will reach its target.

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 04/09/03 at 10:06 PM

a very beautiful poem......

Posted by Lauren Singer on 04/23/03 at 02:47 AM

a beautifully heartfelt poem that everyone can relate to in some way. good luck :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/23/03 at 04:18 PM

Poignant piece of writing. Nicely illustrates how love can turn us upside down.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/22/03 at 05:01 AM

Hi Christel, Just finished reading your poem. It's beautiful. Chris is right love can turn ya upside down. Hope it works out well for ya. Peace & Joy, Jean.

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