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[Library] Human-ism
by Nikki RiceAlways perpetuating these fragmented "ism's", the human race as transparent as prisms; adding colors to a monochrome world - the grays are red and the straights are curled. Imagination helps to draw some conclusions... reality mixed with dumb-founding illusions. Like blades of grass are too dull to slice, too many statements for our minds to splice. 04/04/2003 Author's Note: This is a short commentary I wrote about how truly subjective the world really is.
Posted on 04/05/2003
Copyright © 2024 Nikki Rice
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Andrew S Adams on 04/05/03 at 04:50 AM heya, i reviewed this one for your membership, its quite a nice statement. i like how you dont use line breaks- its a great form, and you make wonderful use of it here. |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/05/03 at 07:02 AM i could hear this as a song... it's got a good flow, and i agree with ASA about the line breaks... good work:) |
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