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In the morning

by John Ilotan

She gives me coffee in bed
my beautiful longhaired wife
with her hotcoffee mouth
then we make love
while the dogs
half asleep
pretend
not to watch

03/22/2003

Posted on 04/04/2003
Copyright © 2019 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/05/03 at 09:07 PM

again, a vivid snapshot- welcome to the site, your poems will be on my 'to watch' list!

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 04/06/03 at 05:22 AM

I agree with Ashley, very spicey and the best way one can start the day........

Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/01/03 at 06:25 PM

LoL.. Oh my! The dogs had quite a show :)

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:13 AM

make love in the morning? what's that about? oh yeah, i have kids.

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 10/05/03 at 02:56 PM

I am happy to hear such a deep sentiment from husband to wife. Take a bow on this.

Posted by Katerina T Nix on 02/29/04 at 02:00 AM

The more I read, the more impressive your writing is to me. Well done....again. Kat:)

Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/21/04 at 01:08 AM

I'm not sure if you intended to get a laugh from this but I could't help myself picturing the dog. Excellent read.

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