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Grandfather Clock

by Bruce W Niedt

 

 

It is hard to resist such a metaphor:

the new grandfather clock standing stately

in the corner of my dining room,

while the other grandfather of this house

waits in a hospital bed, to save his failing heart.

 

A small inheritance from my mother,

a retirement gift from the phone company,

the clock sat in its carton, blind and silent,

in a living room that waited for a promise

of redecoration for nine years.

I brought it home when she died.

 

I unwrapped the cardboard sarcophagus,

pulled the chains of the counterweights,

nudged the mirrored-brass pendulum to motion,

and marveled at the first sounding of chimes,

the Westminster tune, tantalizing,

revealing a little more melody

every fifteeen minutes.

 

The other grandfather, his muscle straining

with every beat, stoically holds his own,

as the doctor threads a wire and balloon

through his veins.  With any luck, the blood

will sluice back through the body, a river

squeezed through hollow branches.

The heart will cycle, keep its own time.

 

As the minute hand stretches to twelve,

we are rewarded with the whole of the song,

and the counting of the hour, a deep, slight

discord of tubular bells, announcing

another arbitrary chunk of time survived.

At the top of the dial, peeking from the metal cutout,

leers a moon-face, three-quarters full.

 

04/04/2003

Author's Note: Revised 4/4/03 (Thanks, James!) - now does anyone have an idea for a better title?

Posted on 04/04/2003
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/07/03 at 04:39 PM

Not sure I get the metaphor you talk about, but I sure like the poem just the same.

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