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Eternally

by John Ilotan

We are soul mates,
created in a celestial heaven,
born among stardust,
destined to love,
before time,
for all time.
We held hands before our bodies formed.
We laughed and loved
and flew like comets
past stars and new born galaxies.

We are soulmates.
In the darkened skies our souls entwined.
Through the brilliant suns our hearts exploded.

We are soul mates,
created in an earthly heaven
of our own making,
dedicated to loving one another
for all time.
We laugh and love
and sail through life together,
two halves of one whole.

We are soul mates,
in the darkness i reach for you
and our souls entwine.
Through the years I'll hold you
and my heart explodes.

04/02/2003

Posted on 04/02/2003
Copyright © 2019 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/02/03 at 11:22 AM

Extremely beautiful!

Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/02/03 at 02:37 PM

i love this one... especially the last line... wonderful:)

Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/02/03 at 05:39 PM

very nice :)

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 04/04/03 at 12:12 AM

you've really captured it here...outstanding

Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/05/03 at 09:00 PM

nice to delve into a poetic definition of 'soul mates' - so many speak of it, few illustrate as you have. just lovely.

Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 04/07/03 at 03:11 AM

Very warm and touching ... beautiful poem ... =0)

Posted by Vimal Rony on 04/10/03 at 11:33 PM

Such a wonderfully romantic poem!Perfect piece John.

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/11/03 at 03:08 PM

God that's beautiful...

Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/23/03 at 01:22 PM

*tears* this is unutterably beautiful...

Posted by Lisa-Dawn Sparling on 04/26/03 at 01:54 AM

that was magical. We can all be so lucky as to find that soul mate

Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/01/03 at 06:18 PM

This is an amazing poem, John.. beautiful in every way.. GREAT read!

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/05/03 at 02:10 AM

this is so beautiful ... it is how i feel about my husband.

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/21/03 at 02:23 PM

wow. the big bang theory love version =)

Posted by Christopher J Davidson on 12/12/03 at 01:40 AM

A wonderful story of love and how it goes...great piece!

Posted by Rebecca Lin on 12/06/05 at 10:52 PM

Aww that's so beautiful. I love it.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/06/06 at 04:52 AM

Enjoyed your writing here. Thanks for the read.

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