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Her Baby Blues

by Quinlan L Gibson

These baby blues
diminish you.
They see right through
what you're trying to do.
They see what you say
and toss it away.
Maybe another day.
They'll feel true.

03/28/2003

Author's Note: I see, the waiting, to see if i'll walk.

Posted on 03/28/2003
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/28/03 at 04:35 PM

Oohhh, baby blues with attitude! You go girl! :o)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/28/03 at 05:36 PM

There's indeed strength in brevity as exhibited in this poem. Good work!

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