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dreams vs. reality
by Quinlan L GibsonI had a dream
the other night.
I said,
"I love you"
and you said
it back.
I had a dream
a year ago.
I said,
"I love you"
on the phone
and you said
it back.
I had a dream
two years ago.
I whispered,
"I love you"
in your ear
and you whispered
it back.
I spent the weekend
just this past
I said,
"I love you"
and you said
"I know you do".
03/25/2003
Author's Note: reality bites...
update: shortly after midnight, 1/1/04, he said it back:)
3 years i've waited to hear that.
Posted on 03/26/2003
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/26/03 at 04:31 PM That stings! But that's how it becomes most of the times. Great one Quin! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/26/03 at 05:15 PM Wishful thinking carried to a whole new level. Just remember to pinch yourself. :o) |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/28/03 at 12:18 PM When reality bites...... bite it back!
Sometimes those 3 little words can be soooo hard for some people to say and sometimes those same 3 little words can be so hard for some people to live without! Nicely said Quinlan! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/28/03 at 04:25 PM wow...devastating little poem...hard-hitting..like a punch! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 11/09/06 at 02:12 AM isn't understanding an underrated beautiful? |
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