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about you

by Andrew S Adams

that one was about you.
this one was about you-
until it was about
being about you.
now it's about my struggle
to find the right words
to write about you.
this becomes harder and harder
as i know everything about you-
i have nothing left to wonder upon
but wondering if theres something more in you i should dwell on
and there most likely is
but i'm still looking

so, i am walking about you.
not around, or next to-
just about your area
and basquing in your glow.

i am thinking about you
talking to you-
but i am walking into
walls about you.

this poem was about you.
til it became being about
being about you.

03/19/2003

Author's Note: i'm crazy

Posted on 03/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 03/23/03 at 06:48 AM

All right...who gave you the power to twist my mind around so well? Loveliness Andy...;)

Posted by Wendy Geal on 01/22/04 at 04:00 AM

this is awesome, i love it.

Posted by Scott Cadence on 04/19/04 at 05:23 PM

how did I miss this one... loved it. :)

Posted by Scott Cadence on 05/12/04 at 07:38 PM

apparently everyone is in love with this poem... haha, just noticed that. :)

Posted by Ava Blu on 12/02/04 at 05:23 AM

I adore this! I can relate perfectly.

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