|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kate Donovan on 03/15/03 at 05:51 AM|
i love this, it's absolutely beautiful.
|Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 12:39 PM|
This well crafted verse is a superb blend of poetry and art, Allan. Wonderfilled energy. Peace...
|Posted by Sam Roberts on 03/15/03 at 01:16 PM|
beautiful..The structure and flow is amazing.
Nice work x
|Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 03/15/03 at 07:12 PM|
Lovely word choices. Flawless images. Very nicely done. Welcome to pathetic.org. : )
|Posted by Lori Johnson on 03/20/03 at 09:00 PM|
Amazing imagery here, Allan. :)
|Posted by John Ilotan on 04/08/03 at 01:37 PM|
Excellent poem for an early A.M.
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/08/03 at 10:01 PM|
*softly smiling*..... you know I can just see it. "ruddy morning" "garishly fierce silhouette" I think are my favorite immages in this piece.
|Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/25/03 at 01:26 AM|
Ahhhhh, those mornings, recaptured...thanks.
|Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/30/03 at 06:49 AM|
Great little piece, wonderful images...struggling with loose fingers to loosen knots...sounds like everymorning for me...just blurrs.
|Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/28/03 at 08:33 AM|
The closest to a painting I think a poem can get to. I can see the picture in my mind.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/18/03 at 09:06 PM|
most enjoyable poetry
|Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/24/05 at 09:49 PM|
I still think this is a fantastic poem!
|Posted by Stephanie Kent on 11/27/07 at 12:19 AM|
somehow i think my favorite line is the one about the second drawer of the dresser...something about the specificity. well done.