Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kate Donovan on 03/15/03 at 05:51 AM i love this, it's absolutely beautiful. |
Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 12:39 PM This well crafted verse is a superb blend of poetry and art, Allan. Wonderfilled energy. Peace... |
Posted by Sam Roberts on 03/15/03 at 01:16 PM beautiful..The structure and flow is amazing.
Nice work x |
Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 03/15/03 at 07:12 PM Lovely word choices. Flawless images. Very nicely done. Welcome to pathetic.org. : ) |
Posted by Lori Johnson on 03/20/03 at 09:00 PM Amazing imagery here, Allan. :) |
Posted by John Ilotan on 04/08/03 at 01:37 PM Excellent poem for an early A.M. |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/08/03 at 10:01 PM *softly smiling*..... you know I can just see it. "ruddy morning" "garishly fierce silhouette" I think are my favorite immages in this piece. |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/25/03 at 01:26 AM Ahhhhh, those mornings, recaptured...thanks. |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 04/30/03 at 06:49 AM Great little piece, wonderful images...struggling with loose fingers to loosen knots...sounds like everymorning for me...just blurrs. |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/28/03 at 08:33 AM The closest to a painting I think a poem can get to. I can see the picture in my mind. |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/18/03 at 09:06 PM most enjoyable poetry |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/24/05 at 09:49 PM I still think this is a fantastic poem! |
Posted by Stephanie Kent on 11/27/07 at 12:19 AM somehow i think my favorite line is the one about the second drawer of the dresser...something about the specificity. well done. |