| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/14/03 at 12:32 AM A lovely imaginative trip! Thanks so much, Mina... |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 05/27/03 at 04:40 PM Fantastic beauty in a dreamy poem. I enjoyed this
like a romantic sleepwalk. Very nice work. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/03/03 at 02:58 PM The imagery in this piece is vivid and brilliant. I love the way the stanzas build on light, water, soil and culminates in flower. These earthy images really amplify the theme. Great poem. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 02:42 AM Dreamy and romantic |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 11/24/03 at 06:49 AM *sigh* absolutely dreamy, Graeme. great flow, great words, great imagery- need i go on :) Kat. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/16/04 at 01:42 AM Truly eloquent words sir that I'm sure will stand the test of time in any lass' heart. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/06/04 at 07:42 AM ah, the blossoming of moon-fed roses... a love poem... beautiful, graeme... blessings... |
| Posted by Deborah S Regan on 09/14/04 at 05:56 PM wonderful poem |
