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Ripples in the Water II
by Britt Zimmermanvibrations
sound waves
generating heat
sweat
breath
air becomes density
atoms collide
friction electrifying
liquid
smooth
leveling itself
folding in on itself
finding gravity
finding chemistry
finding flame
finding you... 03/12/2003 Posted on 03/12/2003
Copyright © 2024 Britt Zimmerman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/12/03 at 07:59 PM Nice work. Very rough and elemental. Nice form. Adds to the chaotic feel of the words.
-Mina |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/12/03 at 08:39 PM Neat combination of humanity and physics, and an electrifying reminder that we're all composed of the same universal elements. |
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