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Last Frame

by Bruce W Niedt


When I go out
let it be as a bowling ball:
sixteen-pound, resin-polished,
black as a January night.

Lob me down
that smooth varnished lane,
hardwood rumble,
a graceful arc –

scattering ten pins with
cacophonous clatter,
valedictory strike,
X in the box, a perfect frame.

Don’t wait for me
at the ball return.

03/11/2003

Author's Note: [First published in Schuylkill Valley Journal, Fall 2004; also nominated by the editors for a Pushcart Prize.]

Posted on 03/11/2003
Copyright © 2025 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/11/03 at 05:36 PM

LOL! Brilliant use of metaphor. You've outplayed yourself again master Bruce.

Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/11/03 at 05:37 PM

lol..... I loved this! What a way to "go out"! And the last line..... superb ending!

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