| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Wayne Tate on 11/30/08 at 08:32 AM wow....I'm officially floored...that was so honest I'm speechless |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 03/04/11 at 02:45 AM This is a beautiful poem. I love the intimacy. |
| Posted by Doreen Cavazza on 05/03/11 at 05:53 PM The Haiku is such a powerful piece. Small but yet so large. This was very well done. I enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 07/27/11 at 05:06 AM I wasn't going to sign in, but I had to say that I really loved this haiku! :) great work. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 07/27/11 at 10:26 PM Glad to see this again. It does just what the title promises. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/21/12 at 08:38 PM This reminds me of my husband. He's always wanting to breathe my breath. Lovely work! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/23/12 at 04:43 PM Wonderfully put! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/24/12 at 09:46 PM Just Right
perfect lip pressure
tender yet confident
just enough moisture
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