Loving You (HAIKU)-- (to T.A.) by Melanie A BennettEverything you are
Makes me love you so much more
Than I did before
Everything you'll be
Makes me want tomorrow now
My future with you
Each morning I wake
Thinking only of your smile
Needing to feel you
Again 03/01/2003 Author's Note: To my love! I love you more and more each day! :)
Posted on 03/01/2003 Copyright © 2024 Melanie A Bennett
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/01/03 at 04:42 PM beautiful! |
Posted by Anita Mac on 03/01/03 at 06:20 PM I've recently become privilaged enough to say I know what you mean... Simply put, but what else is there to say? |
Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/03/03 at 08:07 PM I agree w/the 2 comments above.. this is lovely and warm :) |
Posted by David R Spellman on 03/03/03 at 08:19 PM A sweet and touching bit of verse written from the heart! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/05/03 at 04:09 AM Good love haikus Mel....Charlie |
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