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Loving You (HAIKU)-- (to T.A.)

by Melanie A Bennett

Everything you are
Makes me love you so much more
Than I did before

Everything you'll be
Makes me want tomorrow now
My future with you

Each morning I wake
Thinking only of your smile
Needing to feel you

Again

03/01/2003

Author's Note: To my love! I love you more and more each day! :)

Posted on 03/01/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melanie A Bennett

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/01/03 at 04:42 PM

beautiful!

Posted by Anita Mac on 03/01/03 at 06:20 PM

I've recently become privilaged enough to say I know what you mean... Simply put, but what else is there to say?

Posted by Melissa Arel on 03/03/03 at 08:07 PM

I agree w/the 2 comments above.. this is lovely and warm :)

Posted by David R Spellman on 03/03/03 at 08:19 PM

A sweet and touching bit of verse written from the heart!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/05/03 at 04:09 AM

Good love haikus Mel....Charlie

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