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Daydreams
by Charles E MinshallDaydreams are wonderful.
You can go anyplace
Or do anything,
Do the worst possible
kind of a task
While in life's pleasures
You fully bask.
Ooh, ow! oh! ouch!
Now that's real dumb,
I just clobbered my poor thumb.
02/21/2003 Posted on 02/22/2003
Copyright © 2024 Charles E Minshall
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/22/03 at 06:37 PM A wonderfully funny way of saying, "Concentrate on the task at hand, especially when using a hammer." Daydreams have there place but not when working especially at a risky task. Great fun! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 02/23/03 at 03:22 AM Yeah, ya' gotta watch out for them daydreams when you're doing something that can get ya' hurt, or killed! You hit this one right on the... well, you came close! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/24/03 at 06:07 AM You seem to have struck a nerve with this one Charlie. Peace... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/25/03 at 05:34 PM LOL! I guess the message here is don't daydream too heavily while hammering a nail or better, operating a motor vehicle. |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 02/26/03 at 03:42 AM LOL...well done Charlie. Nice to laugh on a day such as this. |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 02/26/03 at 03:45 PM Great fun! There is a down side to all of this daydreaming going on...how's the thumb? lol |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 03/05/03 at 04:36 PM Very nicely done Charlie... You always make me amile with your poetry! Thank you so much for writing this! ~Mel~ |
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