(haiku) Gray Sky

by Glenn Currier

why oh sky of gray

fall inside and winter me

grip and stab my heart


Posted on 02/20/2003
Copyright © 2023 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/21/03 at 12:03 AM

Touching the icicles in my heart. Great haiku!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/21/03 at 02:34 AM

I see extremism.Extreme in minimal.Going to any extreme for this experience of oneness.

Posted by Betania Tesch on 02/22/03 at 07:51 PM

This poem is absolutly charming in it's soft desperation. I am finally feeling like reading again and this was a great opening to that...thank you, Glenn.

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/06/03 at 03:10 PM

fall inside and winter me...simply beautiful Very well written, outstanding imagery

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