Windy Rebuttal by Melissa Arel
This brutal, blustery Wind today
Howled and hollered, and called out my name
And willingly I answered his pompous whining
With looks of disapproval, far from refining
Know what his rebuttal was back unto me?
He shut out the lights from the North to the Sea
With a stomp of my foot he turned them back on
The last thing he needs is for me to tell the Sun.
02/05/2001
Posted on 02/17/2003 Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Oliver Drewman on 02/18/03 at 04:56 AM amusing and playful i like it |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/18/03 at 03:35 PM Paradoxically beautiful and how true. |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/18/03 at 07:14 PM oh man, this is good...I love the last three lines so much that I could not do that appreciation justice beyond the weight of the words themselves!! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/20/03 at 03:50 AM Funtastic Mel....Charlie |
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