Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/15/03 at 03:52 AM The music loving girl seems to have a ever vibrating source of positive energies and a repeatedly reinforced association with the source. The presentation is beautiful. |
Posted by Oscar Martínez on 02/15/03 at 08:07 AM Marvelous! |
Posted by Beth K Hannah on 02/15/03 at 07:56 PM Beautiful...very lovely. It's like when I am shoveling snow at 11 oclock at night lovely. |
Posted by D. Xavier Bari on 02/18/03 at 03:00 AM Graceful and vivid. |
Posted by JD Clay on 03/10/03 at 02:47 PM I say, take full credit and make no excuses for this excitingly pleasant read, Cymbre. A breath of spring, both literally and figuratively. Bravo on becoming Poet Of The Day.
Peace... |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/10/03 at 03:56 PM Those last four lines are a wonderful counterpoint to the beautiful images you paint in the first part of the poem. I see the idea of God living in all being and being in all... I LIKE this kind of God. Good work, Cymbre. |
Posted by Carl Walker on 03/10/03 at 05:45 PM I love the subltety (you know what I'm trying to spell) of your work, congratualtions on POTD |
Posted by Ann Krischus on 03/12/03 at 08:43 PM I've read this a couple times now. It's a beautiful poem. |