pathetic.org :: Long Island (Haiku) by Leah Laiben

Long Island (Haiku)

There are no stars here,
just empty water and sky;
mirrors reflecting.

02/12/2003

Posted on 02/12/2003
Copyright © 2025 Leah Laiben

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/12/03 at 05:56 PM

Quite effective haiku!

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 02/12/03 at 06:37 PM

wow...quite unusual for you to try on a haiku! :) this is beautiful.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/12/03 at 08:50 PM

sounds like a quiet cove on the North Shore..or am I wrong?

Posted by David R Spellman on 02/13/03 at 09:27 PM

Great image presented in this haiku - well done!

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