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Viper
by Charles E Minshall
A ray of sunshine
Snakes accross the floor,
A viper in the morning
To a blood shot eye.
01/24/2003 Posted on 01/25/2003
Copyright © 2024 Charles E Minshall
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/25/03 at 04:41 AM hehe...I'm sure that anyone who's ever suffered from a hangover can relate to this ditty. Well expressed Charlie! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/25/03 at 11:31 PM A most apt and terse description of a very bad hang over! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/26/03 at 05:00 AM Now there is a serpentine verse with a bite. Warming stuff, Charlie.
Peace... |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 09/01/03 at 08:54 AM That's an amusing way to look at a 'painful' situation, exactly how it goes. :) |
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