|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Vimal Rony on 01/14/03 at 11:51 PM|
Oh WOW simply outstanding.This is so cool and throbbing with feelings and beautiful imagery.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/15/03 at 07:08 PM|
what more can I add than what's been said already! Amazing poem!!!
|Posted by Carl Walker on 01/19/03 at 02:33 AM|
seems like a story this compelling should be a song. very well woven, thanks
|Posted by Phil P Robson on 02/04/03 at 04:43 PM|
|Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 02/21/03 at 03:13 PM|
Love this poem! Excellent! :)
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/03 at 01:01 PM|
Nice work! Quite original in how you express your loss, desire, angst through the letter.
|Posted by JD Clay on 02/26/03 at 01:21 PM|
Now there is an innovative concept on the jealosy factor. Very creative, Emily. Congratulations on becoming Poet Of The Day.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/26/03 at 03:35 PM|
Clever, a bit tongue-in-cheek I think, a strong sense of regret expressed. Congratulations on POTD!
|Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 02/27/03 at 12:46 AM|
What a pleasure to read this as POTD. Congratulations!
|Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/05/03 at 04:22 AM|
i think its the name...:(
|Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/15/03 at 05:42 AM|
Excellent!!! What a way to portray that sort of jealousy.
|Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/04/05 at 01:52 PM|
i loved how the ending brought it all together. excellent piece!
|Posted by Rebecca Lin on 10/22/05 at 01:44 AM|
wow I really enjoyed that. It sounded like a song.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/17/06 at 05:05 AM|
totally brilliant excellent vivid and just impossible to put away. perfection of what writing accomplishes. I love reading this.
|Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/23/08 at 03:52 PM|
what an awesome concept. my belated congratulations on POTD to you, dear emily.