| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 01/14/03 at 11:51 PM Oh WOW simply outstanding.This is so cool and throbbing with feelings and beautiful imagery. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/15/03 at 07:08 PM what more can I add than what's been said already! Amazing poem!!! |
| Posted by Carl Walker on 01/19/03 at 02:33 AM seems like a story this compelling should be a song. very well woven, thanks |
| Posted by Phil P Robson on 02/04/03 at 04:43 PM Absolutely Wonderful |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 02/21/03 at 03:13 PM Love this poem! Excellent! :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/26/03 at 01:01 PM Nice work! Quite original in how you express your loss, desire, angst through the letter. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/26/03 at 01:21 PM Now there is an innovative concept on the jealosy factor. Very creative, Emily. Congratulations on becoming Poet Of The Day.
Peace... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/26/03 at 03:35 PM Clever, a bit tongue-in-cheek I think, a strong sense of regret expressed. Congratulations on POTD! |
| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 02/27/03 at 12:46 AM What a pleasure to read this as POTD. Congratulations! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/05/03 at 04:22 AM i think its the name...:( |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 03/15/03 at 05:42 AM Excellent!!! What a way to portray that sort of jealousy.
-Mina |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/04/05 at 01:52 PM i loved how the ending brought it all together. excellent piece! |
| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 10/22/05 at 01:44 AM wow I really enjoyed that. It sounded like a song. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/17/06 at 05:05 AM totally brilliant excellent vivid and just impossible to put away. perfection of what writing accomplishes. I love reading this. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/23/08 at 03:52 PM what an awesome concept. my belated congratulations on POTD to you, dear emily. |
