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temptations of a warm shower
by Andrew S Adamsshower filled with steam
a hot escape from our life
a ten minute sort of dream
that's there to be enjoyed
do what you will
just dim the lights
lock the doors
quiet and dark as night
and slowly it starts to warm
the tempting allure of water
and slowly, without warn
your mind and fingers, they wander
and soon, the world spins
and then stops on it's axis
and slowly you drift subconscious
and the night slowly fades away
to a blur. 12/01/2002 Posted on 12/02/2002
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/05/02 at 04:09 AM tempting and warm. i can feel this trickling on my body. |
| Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 07/24/03 at 04:28 AM I'll just stand here and smile at this one. |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 11/14/03 at 08:09 PM ten minutes, what kind of showers do you take? try an hour. 'the world spins/and then stops on it's axis' i like the image that this creates. |
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