| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 11/29/02 at 11:47 PM BRAVO!!! Oh thank you BOTH so much! I am so excited, and this was WONDERFUL! You have definitely captured the cat.. "urinate in your lap..", "... I will cuddle with you when I feel like it..." I couldn't restrain the giggle that escaped. I can barely wait to read more translations. |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 11/30/02 at 06:41 AM I thank you, my cat thanks you. :)
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| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 12/02/02 at 05:48 AM Amazing how you take every nuance of an extended simile and run with it, even the almost-taboo thoughts that come with such musings. Lots of sensuality and insight here. Wonderful! And thank you David for an expert (I'm sure) translation.... d:-) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/03/02 at 02:44 AM Your poetry is outstanding! |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/05/02 at 09:27 PM Very nice. Very nice indeed. Cheers! It is a very nice piece of work. You have my applause. |
| Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 12/22/02 at 03:52 PM Congratulations on POTD! With the translations your work is available to moer readers, and it is truly wonderful! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 12/22/02 at 08:45 PM Después que primero leer este poema magnífico, yo supe tuvo la grandeza escrita por todas partes. Gozo realmente la manera usted ha llegado a ser el gato y el Poeta Del Día. Las felicitaciones. La paz.. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 07/20/04 at 07:05 AM I will demolish your pride
urinate on your lap
and you will smile at me slowly
.......and I rule only to make them speak
and to shut them up when the night
hangs itself from the earrings
of nocturnal flux
anticipating beautiful stars
the which I scare off in order
to chase!.....kitty likes! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/07/07 at 10:54 AM The closely watched being-- shivers and stretches under your eye, temperature rising it leaps over the fence of night into flowers still awake and turn to words. And the lips of your "bedroom ceiling"-- speak. |
