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If Inspiration Were My Sole Need ...

by Ken Harnisch

Was inspiration my sole need tonight

I would find a coffee house, where poets

Ply their woeful trade with three-stringed guitars

Playing in the background, and willowy blondes

Recite their verse in low, breathy mantras

And the air is filled with smoke, some of it

Legal, and the coffee is bitter and black

And served in tiny cups where the help

Doesn’t rush you, but doesn’t rush to help you

Either, believing you are all too enchanted

By metaphysical words spoken the way

You imagine mosquitoes drone when they are angry

At the gods who made, then sprayed DDT,

And you go home and ply through your disks

And disks of poetry and cry out loud, what the hell was

I thinking, I’m no good, and fling them, like Mini-Frisbees,

Across the room, only to remember all criticism is subjective

And that if Ms. Ditzy with the guitar were any good

She’d have her own volumes published and be on Oprah and even

PBS, if the sponsors could find enough money to have people on

Who only recited poetry. But of course, not during pledge week

Because the people with the bucks don’t read poetry, which we

Already know when we mail them into to obscure journals

Who offer us but subscriptions to their own magazines for the trouble

We went through just sending them in, so, no – sigh - I don’t need inspiration

Tonight. But what the hell, could we just make love?

11/25/2002

Author's Note: Happy Thanksgiving, all..:)

Posted on 11/25/2002
Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quinn Vokes on 11/25/02 at 10:52 PM

cute. nice imagery... i feel like i'm in this poem, seeing everything you see...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/26/02 at 07:06 AM

yes, this read like a story script where I could easily step into and be a character in it. And yeah love the ending...making love is always inspiring :)

Posted by JD Clay on 11/26/02 at 04:14 PM

I love the non-chalant feel of this expansive piece and as long as I'm here, I'll have a cappuccino. Masterfully done Ken. Peace...

Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/26/02 at 05:26 PM

Very vivid peice, Ken. I like the imagery

Posted by Anne Howe on 11/27/02 at 10:32 AM

a compelling read with excellent imagery

Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/27/02 at 12:37 PM

LOLOL.... You set the scene superbly, then deliverd the punch line with pinach (sp). I Laughed Soooo Hard... I think this is one of my favorites!

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 11/29/02 at 07:54 AM

i felt i was transported into one of those mafia movie scenes. LOL. great ending. =)

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