If Inspiration Were My Sole Need ... by Ken HarnischWas inspiration my sole need tonight
I would find a coffee house, where poets
Ply their woeful trade with three-stringed guitars
Playing in the background, and willowy blondes
Recite their verse in low, breathy mantras
And the air is filled with smoke, some of it
Legal, and the coffee is bitter and black
And served in tiny cups where the help
Doesnt rush you, but doesnt rush to help you
Either, believing you are all too enchanted
By metaphysical words spoken the way
You imagine mosquitoes drone when they are angry
At the gods who made, then sprayed DDT,
And you go home and ply through your disks
And disks of poetry and cry out loud, what the hell was
I thinking, Im no good, and fling them, like Mini-Frisbees,
Across the room, only to remember all criticism is subjective
And that if Ms. Ditzy with the guitar were any good
Shed have her own volumes published and be on Oprah and even
PBS, if the sponsors could find enough money to have people on
Who only recited poetry. But of course, not during pledge week
Because the people with the bucks dont read poetry, which we
Already know when we mail them into to obscure journals
Who offer us but subscriptions to their own magazines for the trouble
We went through just sending them in, so, no sigh - I dont need inspiration
Tonight. But what the hell, could we just make love? 11/25/2002 Author's Note: Happy Thanksgiving, all..:)
Posted on 11/25/2002 Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Quinn Vokes on 11/25/02 at 10:52 PM cute. nice imagery... i feel like i'm in this poem, seeing everything you see... |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/26/02 at 07:06 AM yes, this read like a story script where I could easily step into and be a character in it. And yeah love the ending...making love is always inspiring :) |
Posted by JD Clay on 11/26/02 at 04:14 PM I love the non-chalant feel of this expansive piece and as long as I'm here, I'll have a cappuccino. Masterfully done Ken. Peace... |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/26/02 at 05:26 PM Very vivid peice, Ken. I like the imagery |
Posted by Anne Howe on 11/27/02 at 10:32 AM a compelling read with excellent imagery |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/27/02 at 12:37 PM LOLOL.... You set the scene superbly, then deliverd the punch line with pinach (sp). I Laughed Soooo Hard... I think this is one of my favorites! |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 11/29/02 at 07:54 AM i felt i was transported into one of those mafia movie scenes. LOL. great ending. =) |
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