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Allow Me To Be

by Anne Engelen

 

Like a purple tree or a skygreen bee

Allow me to be your fantasy  

 

Let me enjoy ....no longer coy

The pleasures of creating our symphony

 

Then we can dance and get in trance

Our souls in perfect harmony

 

09/11/2002

11/09/2002

Posted on 11/09/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 11/09/02 at 04:19 PM

Wow, this is a great piece!...Anne, I love the way this flows.....MUAHS!

Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/12/02 at 12:20 AM

Oh this is so amazing. I adore this poem, I am smiling for you

Posted by JD Clay on 11/13/02 at 04:18 PM

The last word says it all quite beautifully Anne. Peace...

Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/21/03 at 04:30 AM

I feel both bliss and yearning here... the desire to be unfettered in one's joy. I like this flight, Anne.

Posted by Darren Swift on 03/16/06 at 05:08 PM

Nice work - the mid rhymes and couplet end rhymes work perfectly together - I liked this. - Jimmy

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