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A story about me

by Andrew S Adams

once upon a time
a boy named me
thought it would be fine
to enjoy insanity
and pretty soon that boy
met a squirrel named joe
and now he's overjoyed
they're best friends, you know
but one day
they needed some food
thought it would be okay
to run across the road
to the hous where me lived
to get them both some pie
and joe didnt like what me gave
so joe had to die...
and now men in white coats
sit outside me's padded cell
he sees them write notes
about what, he cant tell...

maybe they want some pie.

11/08/2002

Author's Note: i swear to god, i usually write better than this.

Posted on 11/08/2002
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 12/11/02 at 01:53 AM

it's actually good. funny. like a children's story. =)))

Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/25/03 at 02:48 AM

At first I thought you were heading for "Harvey" and Jimmy Stewart, till you killed the poor rodent off!! lol, liked the story anyway!

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