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Braided Mind
by Julie Adamsbraided mind
finds loopholes
in the vines of
ancestory, and tries to
find roots
tie boots tight
stand tall
let down your hair
swing through your locks
'chile
and the Dreamtime Stories
will come
as sure as those braids
are rooted deep within 11/06/2002 Posted on 11/07/2002
Copyright © 2025 Julie Adams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 11/07/02 at 05:05 AM somehow conjures up a surreal painting ..... i like it :) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/13/02 at 05:29 PM Such an amazing rhythmn, I love the internal rhyme. I love the title ;) |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 11/13/02 at 05:55 PM nice poem, Jewels!....it sounds like such a sweet escape!...MUAHS |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/14/02 at 05:21 PM Really like how this flows and bounces down my computer screen Jewels. Fun poem nicley tinged with a bit of mystery. |
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