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by JD Clay

 

 

Funny: I didn’t see that giant eraser when she penciled me in.

 

 

 

I am listening to Clarence Spady ~ Nature of the Beast

09/03/2002

Posted on 11/07/2002
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 11/07/02 at 01:23 AM

LOL! I loved this introspection!

Posted by Betania Tesch on 11/08/02 at 03:13 PM

ouch. indeed...there's always a retratction waiting somewhere, so it seems. *pats your head*

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/11/02 at 07:56 PM

LOL! The Inimtable Wit strikes again!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/11/02 at 09:29 PM

OUCH! Never thought an eraser could leave such a deep wound, but then again, all too relateable! Well spoken sir. :o)

Posted by Rula Shin on 03/29/04 at 12:42 AM

Yup, the double edged sword that is a 'pencil' - I laughed my butt off on this one! :-)

Posted by J. P. Davies on 04/27/04 at 10:50 PM

*nods* YUP, "Excuse me Mrs. Busybody, could you pencil me in when you can?" is a quote from one of my Fav songs. :)

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/15/08 at 06:51 PM

What a chuckle! Love it.

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