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Play Thing

by Charles J Hannan

Rip into my heart
Like a child does on Christmas day
Opening my feelings
For show and tell
A shiny new toy to play with
It is your favorite
Untill another heart
A better heart
Comes along

11/05/2002

Posted on 11/05/2002
Copyright © 2025 Charles J Hannan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Amy Niggel on 11/06/02 at 05:57 PM

wow very powerful emotion here, highly impressive!!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/06/02 at 05:58 PM

Ouch! Excellent use of metaphor and analogy , Charles.

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