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Sticky Business
by Anne EngelenHot she enters his domain
Only to satisfy his hunger
Unselfish
Total deliverance to his game
All she knows
she 'll be eaten all the same
But before the final bite
That will leave her in total darkness
He prepares her delight
So she will taste just right
Dripping thick sticky drops
On her hot surface
Slowly one by one
Carefully looking where they hit
Each on their own perfect spot
Not wanting to pour too much at once
Fingersmearing out the sweet sticky mass
Tracing her round curves
Gracefully to her edges
Totally absorbed
She's ready for him
To take her
now
The most tasteful
syrupy pancake of them all
11/03/2002 Posted on 11/03/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 11/03/02 at 05:44 PM MMMMMM!..this is making me hungry for.....?...great poem, Anne..MUAHS |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 11/05/02 at 02:40 PM Quite evocative and suggestive and such a delicious treat. Nicely done Anne. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/07/02 at 05:30 AM Hehehehe! I will never look at a short stack the same. I love flap-jacks and you got me lickin' my lips again. Great stuff, kid. p |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 11/26/02 at 01:31 PM You have hit on two of my passions...when combined they make for a hedonistic feast of the senses...if I can't have them in the flesh, I'll take your vivid imagery as a wonderful soulful snack! - Delicious! - I just love those quirky twists at the end of a juicy poem! - Yum! - RCat |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/30/03 at 12:56 AM YEOWZA! One of the best poetic links between food and sex I've ever read. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 09/26/03 at 08:36 AM Anne, I've never seen pancakes as sensual and sexy, but you have made my breakfast a many faceted treat! Thanks for such a delightful poem. |
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