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the lingering sound of the sea
in a hollow shell resonances
So are your endless whispers eternized
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my soul to your heartbeat slowdances
ThatÂ’s how my restless heart subsides
and finds peace in your comforting embraces
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The sun kisses a new day every morning
That's how I welcome you in my life
11/02/2002 Posted on 11/02/2002
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen
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| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 11/02/02 at 11:33 PM I like like this one, Anne...it flows well..MUAHS! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/03/02 at 11:30 PM Really like the use of repetition and form here Anne. This line is especially priceless: So are your endless whispers eternized. Eternized: love the ring of this altered/extended word. Great example of how a living language like English evolves over time; Webster's take note!!!
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| Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/07/02 at 04:55 PM Memorable poem, great flow/repetition adds to this. Perfect ending |
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